Cloudy lesson

One day there was a boy called Sora who was staying at his grandads house. His grandad had a house in the sky and his name was James.
   

On the last day of his holiday James showed Sora a secret, he could make clouds with a metal thingy (as Sora called it.) When Sora saw it, it was in a circular shape.James stepped up to the big metal thingy and did a big blow.The air went through the hoop and when it came out the other side it was a fluffy white cloud .

When it was Soras turn  he took a big breath and "thooooo" there right in front  of him there was a little cloud . It was as small as a ant compared to James's.Sora was discouraged,he took one more breath .But Sora was leaning to hard on the pole.The position of the pole bent and fell over ,when Sora stood back up he realised that he had ruined it the "look on James face will hurt me for life"Sora thought as he saw the look on James's face.

Sora felt sorry for James so he said "let's try to make different shapes"."I'll give it a shot " said James.First they made a star then they made a bunny then a heart they had great fun that day and they were never sad again .





By Beth

The Catch

It was a nice sunny day and a boy was catching fish for his village by a small pond that was drying up quickly. "Huh?" the boy said as he felt his line tug. The boy sighed as he realised it was just a small fish and he needed to feed his whole village.

Just as he was about to go back to his village, he heard a soft whimper as if an animal had hurt itself. There it was again, that soft whimper filled the boy with sadness. He saw that the fox was trapped in a hunters trap, sooner or later the hunter would come and see his catch. The boy's heart filled with grief as he thought about this poor fox being skinned  to be a rug. The boy put a determined look on his face but when he cut the rope to let the innocent fox free the fox bolted. The fox smelled the fish, and he dived  into the bowl and snatched up the fish.

 This fox was very fast and tricky to catch. It pounced on the boy once and did it again. The boy was so frustrated but the fox continue running away and wove through the trees and up mountains all the way to a gloomy and dusty field.

When the fog cleared there was a big open blue sea ,the boy looked at the sea and as the boy looked at the fox a splash came from the water! THERE WAS A BIG FISH! The boy was astonished at the amazing sight of the big fish.The boy got a stick and carved a rock into a hook. He caught fish all day long.

When it was  time to go he gave one of the little fish that he had caught to the fox. When the boy was out of sight the fox sat as still as a sculpture on a rock and faded into a spirit. 

THE END!

Autumn Leaves

Here is my Autumn Leaves poem.

Clock tower writing

Once a long time ago in a faraway land there was a beautiful princess called Annabeth and her husband Luke .Luke is one of the most  important people in the kingdom.FIVE YEARS LATER.......Hi we're do you want to go for our country's 60th  anniversary thets go too the Coramandal in New Zealand. For the anniversary of this amazing country that's a great idea Annabeth said but I have important bissness to atened to the week after the anniversary so we can't be gone for to long .ok Luke said but I want to go to this clock tower that you get to tern it by yourself cool I guess that it would be nice I exclaimed as we got on the cossboat the next day oh it will be because you get trapped in the trap that I set up for you so that I could rule the world Luke prayed in his head .ON THE DAY THEY ARRIVED thets go now  to the clock tower now .thets go then Annabeth said blindly when they got to the tower Annabeth  got told to put on a dress on and Luke said no to puting the pair of jeans that he had pretended to not fit in and with in a few minutes Annabeth was in the clock tower and having the time of her life.Then Luke blurred out I'm going to be back after I go to the toilet bye said Annabeth as he left the room then a sudden nose of a door locking started ecoing in the room then Luke said your stuck in there princess and you will never come out.

Goal reflection

Writting : I think that I have  improved in my goal of using more interesting words in my writing because,I have been taking my book home and my mum is enjoying it much more.

Maths:My maths goal is to add groups to 1000 fast I think that I have improved this goal because, in the gloss test Miss Copper said that I have improved a lot ,and I have been practicing at home to aceve this goal .

Reading: I think that I have improved on on my goal to read with fluency  ,but I don't think that I should get a new goal for reading .